Thursday 5 June 2008

Chris's story

Suzy sent me one of chris's works of genius
Enjoy!
THE PRETENDING GODS There once was two boys, Tom and Paul. They were almost criminals. They dreamed that they could pretend to be gods and people can worship them! The sun rose over the horizon bringing rays everywhere. Tom woke up. "Hey Paul! Wake up!" Tom said as he stuck his head out of the bottom bunk and shaking the bed. "I have an idea of how we can work things out to make people worship us!" Paul and Tom was very naughty when they were in full anticipation of being worshiped! How mean! "Maybe we shouldn't wear this type of clothing Tom," Paul said."Maybe we should dress up like a king! These clothing look a lot like gods!" he lifted a jumper and dresses that obviously made them look very much like gods. "Okay then! But how can we show our power?" They discussed and discussed. "Let's go! Let's go! I can hardly wait!" said Tom being hyperactive. "Out the door we go!" Paul said as he flung the door open. A few minutes later Tom whispered into Paul's ear. "Let's say we are the gods Jupiter and Mercury!" Paul agreed. "I am Mercury and you are Jupiter. "Greetings...hey you are new out here I never seen you before." a eldery man said coming up. Tom ran behind Paul and made sure he was not seen. Then Paul pointed towards the rock, and Tom without being seen put it on fire. "H-how did you do that?" the man asked. "I am Jupiter the god. That rock was put on fire by my power. My other god, Mercury is in my kingdom. I will now leave you and tell everyone that is time to worship both of us." Then by a magic trick, Paul dissapeared. "Amazing! I must tell everyone!" As everyone huddled together to see if this was really powerful. Tom and Paul was shocked. What would they do now? Paul looked in the sky and saw dark clouds covering the sky. Now he knew it would be raining! "O POWER OF JUPITER SEND RAIN POURING DOWN SO HARD THAT WE WOULD HAVE TO PUT OUR HOODS ON!" Paul screamed. Soon raindrops fell. Everyone was amazed! "You are a god! Please it's raining so hard that my hood is dripping water! Can you stop the rain please?" the eldery man said again. Tom and Paul was even more shocked. "Well...you see we are not really the gods of the sky! We can only make rain fall down but not make it stop." Tom said, hoping he wouldn't cause any trouble. "Excuse me," a lady came rushing through the crowds. "May I test if they are gods? I have my axe, and I can chop off thier head. They can possibly save it!" Tom and Paul were now even more shocked! So suddenly just as she was about to chop it off, Tom and Paul ran away. But now it was too late. The lady threw the axe at Paul and he was killed! Tom stood there wondering what would happen next. "They aren't gods! He was the leader!!!" Tom was then killed by the angry mob who was surrounding him and coming towards him! MORAL: NEVER PRETEND YOU ARE GODS! PEOPLE CAN TEST YOUR POWER AND YOU COULD BE EASILY BE KILLED!

1 comment:

account said...

that is the strangest story i have ever read